More and more young people are interested in finding out about their family background and history. What are the possible reasons? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, there is a growing trend of looking for family background and history amongst young generations. From my point of view, the main reason for
this
phenomenon is
family reunion
Suggestion
a family reunion
after separated during World War, and there are many upsides since the tourism can have a lot of benefits through foreign people want to
comeback
Suggestion
come back
their homeland. In my opinion, people are searching for their origin to reunite with their separated relatives since war emigration. During that hard time, people constantly moved from
this
refuge to another, so they easily lost contact with their relatives.
For instance
, during Vietnam war, many
citizens including
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citizens, including
my grandfather had gone to
neighboring
having a common boundary or edge; abutting; touching
neighbouring
countries and continued to live after that. He told a lot of stories about Vietnam and his childhood to us, and his
last
wish before passed away is we will come back to Viet Nam and reunite with all relatives. After 10 years searching, we
finally
find out my family in Ho Chi Minh, Viet Nam. I believe the most advantages of
this
trend is that it will boost the tourism industry since many foreign want to go back and visit their hometown. Take my
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
as an example, a few months ago, their cousin had gone back from America after searching for his hometown to meet his family. They
bursted
come open suddenly and violently, as if from internal pressure
burst
into tears and could not control their
feeling
Suggestion
feelings
. He stayed with them 5 days and had to go
back but
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back, but
he promised he would come visit my
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
twice a year and
also
bring his friends. In conclusion, younger people are looking for their family origin to reunite with their relatives and
this
will have many upsides to the tourism industry.
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  • ancestry
  • genealogy
  • digital platforms
  • personal identity
  • globalization
  • genetic predispositions
  • cultural heritage
  • self-awareness
  • DNA testing
  • privacy concerns
  • disillusionment
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