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The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons of this problem and how can it be solved?

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The
movement
 of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems
at
Suggestion
in
both
 places. What are the reasons of
this
problem
 and how can it be solved? The
movement
 of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems
at
Suggestion
in
both
 places. What are the reasons of
this
problem
 and how can it be solved? The
movement
 of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems
at
Suggestion
in
both
 places. What are the reasons of
this
problem
 and how can it be solved? The
movement
 of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems
at
Suggestion
in
both
 places. What are the reasons of
this
problem
 and how can it be solved?
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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