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People thought that human race is steadily improving in every area of life.in which area do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which area do you think we still need to make progress.

Some people believe that sharing details of
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 conducted in scientific, academic and business domain
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are
 beneficial;
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, some people have a different opinion that sharing the specifics could disclose critical
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. While sharing important
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 could open doors to plagiarism, it can
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 provide a comprehensive understanding to the readers creating
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an enormous impact
 on their learning. Sharing sensitive and critical
information
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 like references, statistical analysis freely can lead to several implications in the
research
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. The most common consequence is plagiarism. With the details freely accessible, the fellow researchers can avail the opportunity of copying the content
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of
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 and branding it as their own
research
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 is most common in the PHD courses where students copy the references from the
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 work of fellow students.
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,
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 viewpoint because not sharing all the
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 could leave readers confused. Sharing details provide
complete
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completely
 understanding to the readers.
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, it strengthens the theses and provides solid foundation
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for
 the
research
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 work. Providing important
information
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 like references and statistical analysis can help the reader to understand the conclusion of the result in a better manner.
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, a
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 on global warming is incomplete without a statistical analysis of past and current carbon emissions data, supported by strong references.
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 viewpoint because
research
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 is incomplete without all the details. To conclude, people believe that important
research
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information
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 should not be made freely available due to plagiarism,
on the other hand
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, some believe that important
information
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 should be freely available to the readers to make them understand the full context. In my opinion, important
information
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 should be shared for better understanding
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 the readers.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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