You paid for a one month English Language course at a college overseas but you cannot attend. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter Introduce yourself and give details of the course. Explain why you are unable to attend the course. Say what you would like to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you, as the college administrator, to inform you that I will not be attending the English course

this

semester. My Name is Sam and I am an English literature major from the UK.

Last

month, I saw your advertisement for

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creative writing. Which is something I wanted to learn so much. Unfortunately, things did not go as planned because I

recently

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been in a car accident and I broke my leg.

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surgery and probably have to rest in bed for a period of time.

Consequently

, I think it is going to be very difficult for me to attend the class. For

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I could attend the

scheduled course. If it is possible, I want to know when it is supposed to be. I do hope to study in your college and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sam O’Reilly

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