Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is widely argued that reading subjects for children who want to learn how to read should be online, while some insist on printed subjects. I believe that

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printed subjects have some harmful impacts, children would benefit b

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its advantages which are stated in

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essay. A growing body of research suggests that printed materials for learning to read are more beneficial than e-learning.

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, Despite the wide variety of facilities for using online subjects, limited equipment is required in

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based training system, so most of the schools from all over the world can use

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method.

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can lead to the integrated training system which is equal for every child. To illustrate it, in computer based system, every student needs a c

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computer, and clearly

it has many costs for schools, while some of t

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them, especially

those in developing countries does not have enough expenses, nor have t

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of them or themselves

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many other major problems which need money to be solved but are ignored.

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, reading subjects that are printed is less harmful for eyesight of students. It is not only because of the effects of the light of m

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the monitor

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the eyes

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the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable

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of knowledge about adjusting monitors in an appropriate way to decrease the harms.

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, there are

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negative impacts which are related to the printed subjects. One significant issue is that a great deal of

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is used for creating printed subjects, while less

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is needed in online training. So, printed subjects are not environmentally friendly even if recycled papers are used since pollution will release in a

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the air

and soil due to producing papers in factories.

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, many forests are destroyed because of cutting down trees which are used to make p

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paper

nowadays. In conclusion, both printed and online subjects have merits and demerits, but in my opinion,

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based subjects have more benefits including easy access for all students alongside being safer for their health.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

331 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

online reading materials
printed materials
advantages
disadvantages
technology
convenience
interactivity
accessibility
visual appeal
physical books
parental guidance
digital skills
screen time
learning experience
personal preference
comprehension
critical thinking
creativity
word recognition
grammar
vocabulary development
reading habits

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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that the internet has brought more harm than good. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?