Some people think that the best way to stay fit is joining a gym or health clubs. While others think That doing everyday activities such as walking or climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both aspects give Your Own opinion

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Living in a healthy lifestyle is a vital need for
every one
all people
everyone
. To stay fit and fine for that, a few people give more preference to join the gyms and
health
clubs.
However
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
perceive that following persistent everyday workouts are enough to keep our immunity strong and healthy.
Therefore
, I would discuss both aspects of the statement and the later with my own opinion. Now a days
their
in or at that place
there
are
number
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a number
of sports which are provided in the
health
clubs, people can choose whichever sport they want to do to make
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
fit and healthy, especially when all these activities comes under
experts
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expert
expert's
supervision or well trained coaches.
Moreover
, they can get free suggestions regarding their
health
and diet from the trainers, but only after paying good amount of money for membership card. These kind of facilities or workouts only possible for the
person
, who agree to follow their instructions strictly, who do not feel any difficulty to
chang
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
change
their daily routine or eating habits and one can able to pay for all charges. On the opposing side
,
Accept space
,
everyday activities are well sufficient to keep the
person
healthy by following certain activity like climbing stairs
instead
of using
elevator
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the elevator
elevators
an elevator
. If the
person
maintain
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maintains
these routines reluctantly
then
, they do not need to spend their money on
health
clubs. These activities
are
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also
echofriendly like if they give more importance to walking for short distance work rather than using a vehicle,
by
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with
this
we can alleviate air and noise pollution to some extend.
In addition
, jogging in the park
provid
give something useful or necessary to
provide
proved
provides
fresh air and beautiful nature view and to the other side, running on treadmills only comes with
smell
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the smell
of sweat. To sum up above arguments, everyday activities are more affordable
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
by following them the
person
can save his time, money and
environment
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the environment
too.
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