Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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We as the citizen of
particular provincial having
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a particular provincial, having
a particular provincial having
a key responsibility to take care of our
energy
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and
diet
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an important part of the power to know the well-being condition of the nation, but we all know that authority is having many other functions and roles to perform. But as a citizen of rustic we must have main function to perform is to make a strong eye on
diet
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and fitness as to fight with many viruses, and to make provincial strong and healthy.
Diet
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is the main issue for strength because if we are not responsible for our nutrition
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our body becomes weak and not able to fight with the diseases and make another person ill.
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should be in
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a quantity which gives vitamins, iron, calcium to our body and make us feel strong and make our provincial as an iron. There are 4 types of citizens who are leaving they are tin ages, adults, youngsters, and old age and all are having different taste. But we have to remember that each and every person must have an eye on their health and
diet
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I.e. On food. The biggest example: As we all not that every rustic is facing a big problem of corona virus due to which many deaths occurred. So to make
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virus through our
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chart and make us feel strong so that we all become one and fight with
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so called virus. The regime should
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focus on the
diet
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and
energy
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of the citizens. We are having the
energy
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ministers, Food ministers, Experts etc. If the provincial citizens want that
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responsibility should be taken by the government than they have to make discussion's and plans with their team members and should appoint
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a person who is always there for the help of the candidates of the agrarian and give guidance and awareness regarding the diets and well-being. The power should start campings,
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lectures, advertisements
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, awareness programs, etc.
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to a very great extent or degree
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that they get proper knowledge and training regarding
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. The ministry should focus on every problem of the bucolic. So as per me both should perform proper responsibility for their
energy
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and
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. No one should ne irresponsible and should not take liberal because "Jaan ha to Jahan ha"
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If we are having proper strength than we are having a good and strong family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health-conscious decisions
  • self-discipline
  • informed choices
  • personal accountability
  • regulating food industries
  • implementing policies
  • healthy eating
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies for healthy food
  • enabling environment
  • accessible
  • affordable
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