Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, but not local people. Why this is the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

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letter to complain about the noise which was due to the ongoing road widening process. Let me introduce myself

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5 year and I am staying on the 4th floor, D block. I am doing a software job in one of the Canadian banking firm, which was close to our complex.

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to that, I was one of prime member in the sports club for

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year games programs. My family members are getting disturbed very often on a daily basis due the street repairs. Especially, in the afternoon hours. Due to the Covid-19 pandemic, I started working from home form

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road construction, I am not able to concentrate on duties and unable to attend the conference calls. I heard that nowadays, there are a variety of advanced machines has been used widely to do the road widening and their extension without any noise. I strongly recommend you to use those machinery in order to avoid the disturbance. I hope you will resolve

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sound problem as soon as possible. Your

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Take for granted
Economical constraints
Routine obligations
Programming
Cater
Engagement
Community involvement
Personal connection
Cultural relevance
Discounts
Sense of ownership
Interactive exhibits
Local traditions
Field trips
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