Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, but not local people. Why this is the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to complain about the noise which was due to the ongoing road widening process. Let me introduce myself
first
, I am a resident of
this
complex from
last
5 year and I am staying on the 4th floor, D block. I am doing a software job in one of the Canadian banking firm, which was close to our complex.
In addition
to that, I was one of prime member in the sports club for
last
year games programs. My family members are getting disturbed very often on a daily basis due the street repairs. Especially, in the afternoon hours. Due to the Covid-19 pandemic, I started working from home form
last couple
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the last couple
of weeks. With
this
road construction, I am not able to concentrate on duties and unable to attend the conference calls. I heard that nowadays, there are a variety of advanced machines has been used widely to do the road widening and their extension without any noise. I strongly recommend you to use those machinery in order to avoid the disturbance. I hope you will resolve
this
sound problem as soon as possible. Your
s fai
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Meera
thfully, Shareef meera

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