One of the major problems that faces today’s government is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations, whilst still trying to protect the environment.

Nowadays, governments allotting more lands to build
housing
Suggestion
houses
to accommodate the growing numbers of the
population
along with the efforts not to harm the environment as much as possible.
To begin
with, to construct the residential buildings often result in damaging a natural world.
This
is because when builders are clearing the land to put up the construction site, during
this
process they could be
displacing
Suggestion
displaced
many species, who may be living there.
Therefore
, the government
needs to
Accept comma addition
needs, to
be thoughtful when planning the locations for building houses
for
Suggestion
in
the ever-growing numbers of people.
For example
, many native animals or plants could be living on the outskirts of the city, and if there is no protection for them,
this
could
then
result in them being extinct.
However
, if the demand is not met in providing sufficient numbers of housing for the growing
population
,
then
they will have no roof over their head. So, many would agree that the human
population
's basic need is to have a house to live in,
otherwise
, they could become homeless and forced to live on the streets. That’s why it is crucial for the government to provide
this
basic need,
moreover
, if they live on the street, they might get infected with diseases, and
this
would put extra pressure on the healthcare system of the country.
Nonetheless
, governments need to find solutions, which can protect the natural world, and at the same time can meet the growing demand for housing. In conclusion,
although
there are some drawbacks in building houses, where they might be a natural world exist,
this
could be overlooked, if there is a need for the human
population
to have access to the basic need/or demand, which is a roof over their head.
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