One of the major problems that faces today’s government is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations, whilst still trying to protect the environment.

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Nowadays, governments allotting more lands to build

housing

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houses

to accommodate the growing numbers of the

population

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along with the efforts not to harm the environment as much as possible.

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with, to construct the residential buildings often result in damaging a natural world.

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is because when builders are clearing the land to put up the construction site, during

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process they could be

displacing

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displaced

many species, who may be living there.

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, the government

needs to

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needs, to

be thoughtful when planning the locations for building houses

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the ever-growing numbers of people.

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, many native animals or plants could be living on the outskirts of the city, and if there is no protection for them,

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could

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result in them being extinct.

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, if the demand is not met in providing sufficient numbers of housing for the growing

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then

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they will have no roof over their head. So, many would agree that the human

population

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's basic need is to have a house to live in,

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, they could become homeless and forced to live on the streets. That’s why it is crucial for the government to provide

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basic need,

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, if they live on the street, they might get infected with diseases, and

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would put extra pressure on the healthcare system of the country.

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, governments need to find solutions, which can protect the natural world, and at the same time can meet the growing demand for housing. In conclusion,

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there are some drawbacks in building houses, where they might be a natural world exist,

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could be overlooked, if there is a need for the human

population

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to have access to the basic need/or demand, which is a roof over their head.

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One of the major problems that faces today’s government is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations, whilst still trying to protect the environment.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future career success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessments discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.