There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is Say what happened the last times you complained Explain what you want the manager to do
I am writing
this
letter to you to express my dissatisfaction about the problems
connecting with the sports center
at Change the spelling
centre
last
time. Obviously, I want to inform you the
head Change preposition
of the
problems
of your sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
. Change the spelling
centre
Firstly
, the dood
of the Correct your spelling
good
sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
is completely broken that you should Change the spelling
centre
to
repair it for our security. Change the verb form
apply
Secondly
, the air
conditioner is not worked. Moreover
, in summer the air
is hard and uncomfortable. In addition
, we may feel as if we're not getting enough air
. Nevertheless
, the last
time I feel the absence of oxygen and I train with hardship. However
, I would like that the manager of this
sport
Change the noun form
sports
Change the spelling
centre
center
to pay attention to these problems
and supply our security with new
door and Correct article usage
a new
air
conditioner, where we can breath
clean Replace the word
breathe
air
. I hope, you will not ignore these problems
at this
time, otherwise
I should change my training centre. Yours sincerely WhiteAdd a comma
,otherwise
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The Greeting
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- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
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- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
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