Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?

In recent years, the question of who should take the responsibility in consulting the public on

healthcare

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health care

has been receiving a great deal of public attention.

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patients might self-educate themselves either through the Internet or books, doctors should still be

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the ones

who take

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more responsibility

. One the one hand, there are several compelling reasons why it is only doctors who should hold

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liable to account for one's actions

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for giving advice to patients.

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, since every physician has to undergo the process of rigorous education and training, they are qualified enough to be a better

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consultant

when delivering trustful advice than our sources of information.

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, each doctor is educated at least 6 years of academic training according to their majors,

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as diagnosis and treatment, which would help them gain deeper insight into specialized knowledge.

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, by searching for information in terms of treatments through the Internet, patients are able to put them in danger.

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means that they would run the risk of encountering misinformation or bad advice, which could be worsen their health situations.

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, it is undeniable that doctors should take the responsibility with compelling reasons.

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, since physicians would receive money from their patients called a business transaction, doctors have to conduct the fulfilment of doctor’s duties,

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involving consultant to patients.

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could help patients improve their health.

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, it is

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undoubtable

too obvious to be doubted

indubitable

that doctor is a highly respected profession, they need to transcend regular duties from

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the profession

. In fact, doctors should educate not only their patients, but

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the general public, leading to the enhancement of citizen’s awareness. In conclusion, educating patients about how to improve their health should be one of many responsibilities of doctors.

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practice will benefit not only

patients but

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patients, but

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doctors themselves.