You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter – introduce yourself – explain the situation – say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Chris Browne and I am writing
you
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to express my dissatisfaction with a
laptop
computer I bought in your
store
four days ago. As soon as I turned on the computer, I realized that Windows operating system was not installed in it,
although
the offer said it was included.
In addition
, I chose a
gray
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laptop
and the one I received is black.
Moreover
, the default language of the
laptop
is
Japanesse
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Japanese
and I haven’t been able to change it to my native language, which is English. To make matters worse, the memory specifications of
this
laptop
are not the same as the ones that I read in your
catalog
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. I definitely need
this
situation to be solved as soon as possible. I made the decision to buy the
laptop
at your
store
, because of previous good recommendations some friends of mine gave me about your
store
.
However
, after
this
experience, I feel deceived. I would like you can send me the
laptop
I
first
chose at your
store
, including all the specifications were shown in the offer. If I don’t get a quick response to my request, I hope
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full refund of the payment I already made. Thanks in advance for your response. Yours faithfully, Chris Browne

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flaw
  • purchase date
  • troubleshooting steps
  • affecting
  • repair
  • replacement
  • refund
  • contact information
  • follow-up
  • model
  • issue
  • malfunction
  • defective
  • customer service
  • warranty
  • inconvenience
  • resolution
  • immediate action
  • sincerely
  • regards
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