The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The graph illustrates the quantities of
fish
and different kinds of meats consumed in a European country in the time period between 1979 and 2004. Over this
span of 25 years, the consumption
of beef, lamb and fish
has all decreased while
the consumption
of chicken has dramatically risen.
The biggest consumption
in 1979 was meet
(about 220 Correct your spelling
meat
grams
per person
was consumed every week
) while
the lowest consumption
in 1979 was that of fish
(around 60 grams
per person
per week
). The amount of fish
which was eaten has remained almost constant at about 50 grams
from 1979 until 2004. The trends of beef and lamb consumption
were similar, with decreases in amount
Add an article
an amount
the amount
in
between the years. Change preposition
apply
While
beef consumption
had declined from over 200 grams
per person
per week
to around 100 grams
during 25 years, lamb consumption
fell from 150 grams
to approximately 50 grams
in the same period.
In contrast
, chicken consumption
had risen gradually and reached a peak at 250grams
per Correct your spelling
250 grams
person
per week
in
between 1994 and 2004.Change preposition
apply
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