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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter, • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put into the reference

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Dear
Mr.
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 Thompson, I ‘m writing
this
letter
 to seek a
letter
 of reference from you to support my application for the job of HR trainee in HCL .I am Urvashi
saxena
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Saxena
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, one of your past students of M.BA HR batch 2019. Let me explain
you
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 the importance of it.
This
 job was always my dream job as I got the opportunity to work with
such
 a brand name so don’t want to lose it. I am anxious to start earning soon so as to support my family, as my father has recently retired. Could you please vouch for my character and perseverance in the reference
letter
.
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 More importantly, your reference towards my attitude and aptitude to learn will have a salutary effect on my application.
Additionally
, you need to mention few lines about my character and professional attitude. I look forward to
receive
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 the
letter
 from you. Thank you Yours Sincerely, Urvashi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reference letter
  • former teacher
  • job application
  • recommendation
  • career goals
  • professional development
  • academic performance
  • responsibilities
  • company
  • skills
  • qualifications
  • gratitude
  • support
  • aspirations
  • context
  • interaction
  • additional information
  • correspondence
  • tailor the reference
  • specific qualities
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