Few citizens consider that authorities spending money on arts and culture
whereas
they can invest more money on other social issues which could be more beneficial for the community as a whole. To some
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, I agree that
government
should support art and culture and invest
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its preservation for coming generations,
there are some serious social issues which need more attention
ofChange preposition
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governmentCorrect article usage
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rather than
artsCorrect article usage
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. In
this
I will share one of the major
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which need immediate support from the
government
. First of all, it is
aCorrect article usage
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human psyche
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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always
keepCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to preserveChange the verb form
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theirCorrect pronoun usage
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history.
This
is what we are learning from the ancient age, they had drawn their actions,
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believesReplace the word
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on walls and stones, because they
believeWrong verb form
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it was the best way to transfer their knowledge and history.
This
is essential for every nation and authority to keep alive their heritage and tradition.
in addition
toCorrect pronoun usage
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,
this
is
also
important that
governmentCorrect article usage
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should Verb problem
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invest more money
forChange preposition
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promoting technical education. Technical education could help people to become skillful so they can
further
contribute
inChange preposition
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economyAdd an article
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of the
country
. It is a great need to open vocational schools all over the
country
which provide more
chanceFix the agreement mistake
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toChange preposition
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the general public to become qualified and skilled workers.
Moreover
,
itsCorrect pronoun usage
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enhanceCorrect subject-verb agreement
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employmentCorrect article usage
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ratio and
increaseCorrect subject-verb agreement
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perCorrect article usage
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capita income growth of the
country
. Skilled workers
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considered
humanCorrect article usage
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capital of any
country
.
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That country
Those countries
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country
which
are havingWrong verb form
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less skilled
works Replace the word
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always
dependingWrong verb form
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on foreign workers.
, I prefer to invest more
onChange preposition
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technical education by
governmentCorrect article usage
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,
that would be a great deal.