The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
Given
chart illustrates the rates of Correct article usage
The given
the
unemployed in Australia in 2012. It can be seen that the Correct article usage
apply
percent
of unemployment from rural areas showed a downward trend over the Replace the word
percentage
mid –
Correct your spelling
mid–period
period
, while
the percentage of urban
unemployed population experienced a significant rise.
Add an article
the urban
To begin
in the first quarter
of given
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the given
period
, the percentage of jobless rural people witnessed over 6 %; however
, over the following 2 quarters
there was a sharp surge, nearly 2 %. Add a comma
,quarters
From the
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The
third
to fourth quarter
of the period
saw a fluctuation in the unemployment rate which depicted approximately 5 % in
the end of the Change the preposition
at
quarter
.
When it comes to the urban out of worked
population rate, Add a hyphen
out-of-worked
initial
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the initial
quarter
experienced over 2 %; however
, over the following period
there was a marked growth, about 4 %. In the third
quarter
the percentage of jobless people declined significantly, around 2 %. In spite of the fact that Add a comma
,quarter
he
following double quarters there were fluctuations, it witnessed over 4 % Correct your spelling
the
in
the end of the year.Change the preposition
at
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