Some people think that because some children fins some subjects mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extend do you agree?
These days, it is true that some subjects
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philosophy
are difficult for many students, Use synonyms
hence
some people argue that some difficult subjects should be converted to optional. I disagree with Linking Words
this
idea Linking Words
therefore
I will examine some reasons and give my own opinion.
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To begin
with, a majority subjects that we have learnt from school are useful in our Linking Words
life
. Some students who want to get jobs which are related to mathematics or Use synonyms
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philosophy in
fact they need to learn these subjects. Other students who did not make plans for the future Accept comma addition
philosophy, in
also
need to study these subjects. In the case of mathematics, they can learn about how to deal with their management in their Linking Words
life
through studying division, multiplication and so on. In the case of Use synonyms
philosophy
, students can learn others perspective of living in the modern society so that it helps students comprehend thoughts or acting of others people, Use synonyms
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moreover they
can gain an ability to write or speak to clearly express their own opinion. It can be helpful when they have debates because they can think logically.
To sum up, it is not easy to comprehend some subjects like mathematics or Accept comma addition
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philosophy
for many students, Use synonyms
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however by
studying these subjects will be helpful for many students in a lot of aspects of living our Accept comma addition
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life
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life, such
such
as how to deal with management or how to understand others perspective and they can get a better perspective in Linking Words
life
. With these reasons, I disagree with the idea of that we should make optional of mathematics and Use synonyms
philosophy
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