As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Problems relating to electronic inventions in general have always been one of the topical issues of all over the world. Almost any day of the week you can look at a newspaper and read articles discussing ne

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the negative side

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, phone, television and electronics like

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how they affect on our health. Discussing

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the bad side

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electronic inventions more and strongly influences to our health. Probably everybody would argue that, these electronics like tv and

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greatly affect our eyes,

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tatics now almost four billion people over the world wear glasses for eyesight. Right now many people are spending a huge amount of time on their phone,

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and other electronics, what I mean here is that we need to go away from electronics. A good case in point is my co

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worsen physical fitness.

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of electronic inventions

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and television, people do less physical activity and losing their fit. Take

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, my friend, who was engaged in bodybuilding every day, bought a phone and spent a lot of time with him. Now he is losing his physical form. It is impossible to estimate all the benefits and drawbacks of electronics, but I firmly believe that all things have a two

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and people have to balance both

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In a conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that, we need to spend less time to electronics.