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There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?

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It has been commonly argued for a long
time whether
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time, whether
 immigration had positive effects on countries and worldwide society or not. According to me, I believe that it is important to promote the international
exchange
 of people as the advantages far out weight the disadvantages, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. In the
first
 place, it is frequently concurred by people that many jobs and higher salaries can be pursued only by settling down in a different
country
, especially referring to new emerging economies.
In addition
, the possibility of growing in a personal and professional way
increases
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increase
 when we decide to exit the comfort
zone we
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zone, we
 are living in, as we have to deal with new challenges. Another point worth nothing is that governments should promote the relocation of their residents and the arrival of new inhabitants to create a cultural
exchange
 movement which could contribute to new ideas and improvement of the
country
. Another factor to consider is that, if
this
exchange
 would be promoted, many paradigms and discrimination could be eradicated or reduced all over the world.
On the other hand
, the reallocation is considered by many people to have many disadvantages. One clear
example can
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example, can
 be the creation of a set of cultures that erase the original and the new
country
 ones.
This
 belief creates fear in original residents, and leads to the development of nationalism. As an evidence, racism is another main issue that immigrants face when arriving
to
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in
 another
country
. To summarize, an international
exchange
 and settle of worldwide population could open new possibilities for everyone and every government and could result in an international economic and human development.
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