Now we see a lot of comfort and convenience in the life of children. Their lifestyle has undergone a huge change in that their habits, activities and even social behavior are not what they used to be earlier. Which factors are responsible for this kind of change, and is it desirable or not?

With the passing years way of living has totally changed, especially of children they are getting things which make their lives comfortable as compared to earlier children used to get.
This
essay will discuss what are the causes of
this
change and whether it is beneficial or drawback. To embark on, with augments in disposable income of people and thanks to the advancement of technology that they can eat enough and wear nice and comfortable clothes. They are getting various other amenities which a decade a child does not use to have it.
For example
, in the past, there were no heating and cooling system and they cannot join each and every sport or classes other than educational. Since with tremendously increase the income of the people children of
this
era are living far better life than old ones. Another advantage they got is car or buses.
For instance
, a study shows that every 5th house in the world has at least 1 car in the house which make the children barely walk even small distances like going to
next
block only they need a car or bus to travel.
Thus
, advanced technology
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also plays
has also played
is also playing
a vital part in these comfortable lives.
On the contrary
side,
although
these amenities have lots of benefits, but not good for long run as it affects one's health.
For example
, if a child will not like to walk it will him or her obesity which is not good for physical well being of small young ones. Not just
this but
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this, but
also
long time exposure of smart screens affect their eyes and in small age, they have to wear glasses which is not a good thing. All these have amenities has made them introvert they barely talk with anyone and it
also
had great impact on their studies. To illustrate, children these days are getting lower than average scores in the exam which is not good for their future as they are the future of the country. So there is a must to put the limit to the usage to every facility. In a nutshell, As the saying goes Every coin has two sides.
Likewise
, despite of all positive sides Of these benefits, it still has a major drawback which is not good for juvenile. So there must be some limitation towards the usage of
this
could lead to a much better life.
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