The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
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The maps illustrate how West
Park
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Secondary
School
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transformed after some developments in three main years from 1950 to 2010.
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, it is clearly seen that the secondary
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witnessed a remarkable renovation by replacing some new
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throughout the shown period.
According to
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the 1950 map, West
Park
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Secondary
School
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had only one building with its playground surrounded by houses and
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farmland.
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, after a period of 30 years, the residential area was made into parts of the
school
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. A science block was constructed adjoining the main building, and on the left-hand side of it was a car
park
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. The redevelopment of the
school
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between 1980 and 2010 demonstrates a significant change.
Sports
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field was the new area which replaced the previous farmland in 1980.
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, its
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was minimized and relocated
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to the playground - which was
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made smaller in order for the car
park
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could be extended.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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