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Outline the human causes of climate change. What solutions can be suggested to reduce the effects?

#outline #climate #change #effects
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Climate
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change
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 has become
a
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an
 issue
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that's
 getting worse for many reasons, including human causes.
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 essay will investigate who can people causes
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are playing
have played
 a role in
climate
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change
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 and will give solutions to reduce the issue. A number of people would agree that there are just some reasons why human causes can effect in
climate
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change
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 one of them can be release
carbon
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 emissions from cars and factories.
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 can be a
problem
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 because what that results in is increasing the
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 of ozone.
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However in
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However, in
order
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 to reduce
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 effect recycling materials and using cars that
use
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 renewable energy can be a solution to reduce the effect of release
carbon
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 emissions from cars and factories. Others may would support that deforestation can be a cause of people that can
effects
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effect
climate
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change
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 in reduce the amount of the air (oxygen) absorb
carbon
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 dioxide.In
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 to control the
problem
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 of deforestation it can be suggested that to find
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a different way
different ways
 to not
use
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wood
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wood, for
for example
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use
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 e-books
instead
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 of using normal book. Many people would support that human
cause
an occurrence of something
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 of fossil fuel combination can be effected in related the
carbon
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 dioxide.In
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 to reduce the
problem
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 human can reduce the
use
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 of energy. It can be summarized that human causes can be effected
climate
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change
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however
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 in
order
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 to relieve from
damages
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the damages
 of the effected the essay suggests a
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solution
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