It is often claimed that electronic devices will soon replace paper books. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that types of electronic equipment will soon replace traditional
paper
books before. From my point of view, I completely agree with
this
opinion. There are several drawbacks when using
paper
books. As you known, having a long time before,
paper
was used as a tool to take notes and save information until now.
However
, having a problem that
paper
books were easily
impact
Suggestion
impacted
by outside environment factors
such
as
moilstrute
regard as untrustworthy; regard with suspicion; have no faith or confidence in
mistrust
, insect. Of course, to keep books for a long time that seem to be difficult.
Besides
, it can
undeniable
Suggestion
undeniably
that destroying
environment
Suggestion
the environment
and causing
pollution which
Accept comma addition
pollution, which
paper
manufacture caused
seriously
Suggestion
serious
influent
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
influenced
to nature. Actually, it is not
environmental
Suggestion
environmentally
-friendly when using wood flour from trees and chemical were used in
this
progress. Brief summarize,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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