the chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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crime
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the crime
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3 different areas in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012, Change preposition
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have
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10
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, Robbery has gradually increased from approximately 510 in 2003 to almost 1000 in 2005 and steady discount to 500 in 2008, After that, upturn
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550 in 2010 and a slight decrease to 505 in 2011. And in 2012 have 510 like in 2003. Car theft have 2900 in 2003 and Change preposition
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slight
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decreased
to 2700 in 2005 after that steady decrease to 2000 in 2006, And gradually Replace the word
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to almost 2550 in 2010 and discount to 2500 in 2011. In 2012 have 2900 like Replace the word
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burglary has around 3400 in 2003 and increase to 3700 in 2004 after
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to 1100 in 2008 and increase to 1400 in 2009, After remaining steady Replace the word
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1500 and a slight decrease to around 1400 in 2012.
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Overall
, In Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. Robbery has remained steady to start and end like
, Have 600 in 2003 and 2012. Car theft Change preposition
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gradually decreases to 2000 in 2006 and after that gradually increase
to 2900 in 2012. Burglary start too high more than another, but Wrong verb form
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to 1100 in 2008 and in 2012 have 1400.Replace the word
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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