The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In

this

society, it is the fact that there are many

violence

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violent

happened from teachers in every school, and so does the amount of arguments around

this

situation. Lots of people

are strongly protest

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are strongly protesting

have strongly protested

this

way of education, while others believe that corporal punishment is necessary to educate children, especially with those who have

stubbornness

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stubbornly

. In my opinion, corporal punishment is extremely

unscrupulous and

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unscrupulous, and

I think there should be laws to punish those who make harms to students.

First

, children who used to be punished by physical violence will have psychological problems. Not only psychological

health but

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health, but

also

physical status is

also

affected as well. As far as I know, it is said that there was a nursing school which teachers forced children to drink dirty water because of not obeying the teacher’s request. Another

example in

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example, in

this

issue, a teacher slapped a child 200 times due to saying bad words in school.

Consequently

, that child needed to hospitalize immediately. I do not deny the wrong action of that student, but hitting a person 200 times should get deserved discipline. It is known that there are international laws protecting children and no one is able to harm them

Moreover

, there are few people know the fact that the more times punishing children, the more stubborn these children become in

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. I used to hear a story, a child because of suffering many inhuman retributions from her mother, become restive and unruly with other adults, even sometimes she curses her mother to be dead. So, the problem is the same with teacher punishing students, which means it will be harder for unruly students to be formed a good person in the future. In conclusion, I believe that parents, teachers and other people are not allowed to criticize barbarously to children. There are many ways to punish children

instead

of using corporal one.