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You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: •explain which course you are interested in •say what you know about the university •explain why you should receive the scholarship

#scholarship #program #study #university #course #•explain #•say
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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my interest
for
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 a scholarship program offered by your
university
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. I have done my Post graduation from
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University
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the University
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 of Lahore in the field of marketing. Now, I look forward to
apply
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 for the course
of
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 Digital Marketing. As
,
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apply
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this
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 course is now high in demand and covers wide market segments.
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, I want to pursue
my
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 career in the same field. I am very much convinced that Queen’s
University
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 is an excellent opportunity to excel
my
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 education.
This
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university
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 provides
suitable
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 learning environment to
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 students.
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 institute is considered among the best in the world.
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 year, it
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 awarded with “Best Learning Institute Award”. I consider pride to be part of
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 prestigious
university
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. I belong to a
middle class
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 family. I received
scholarship
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a scholarship
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 during my post graduation because of my highest GPA.
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,
this
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 course helps me to enhance my career.
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,
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 I have
the
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work experience
of
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Digital
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a Digital
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 Marketing Consultant and managed to successfully complete several projects.
This
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 scholarship will support me in making my future a success. I really look forward
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for
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 your response. Yours Faithfully, Talha Hussain

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greeting and closing
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single idea per paragraph
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task response
Clearly respond to all aspects of the task, ensuring a suitable writing tone throughout the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • inquire about
  • scholarship program
  • foreign university
  • course of interest
  • field of study
  • academic achievements
  • extracurricular involvement
  • career goals
  • unique aspects
  • reputation and ranking
  • faculty and research centers
  • strong candidate
  • support my aspirations
  • pursue my passion
  • enhancing my skills
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