Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of children punished
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unresponsible
for their showing lack of care for consequences
irresponsible
childrens
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childrens
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this
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and give my opinions. I strongly agree this
idea because parents are responsible for their childrens
actions.
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officials punished their parents if they break the the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
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. the collection of rules imposed by authority
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Besides
that some childrens
break the low at schools because they are a young person of either sex
children
children's
disagreement
with their teachers and classmates and their actions be the reason for punished their parents. Other people think that if children break the low only children punished by governments because parents Suggestion
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disagreed
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