Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days all people believe that
high
education is a priority to everyone want to find a suitable Suggestion
higher
job
and have a happy life, family, house and other things that is
needed in our daily life, all of that depend on how much money you get in your job
which had been determind
by your education level. From characterized by great determination
determined
this
point, people started to think carfully
about choosing their courses in the university, which led people to separate into two groups.
One one hand, many people taking care or paying attention
carefully
rely
on their ambitions to choose their courses in university and study whatever they like even if their way has a closed end without Suggestion
relies
job
. Their desire to Suggestion
a job
jobs
this
choice coming from logical reasons. Firstly
, students choose the courses that they loved in school and found it very interesting to them and they did well in it. Other
important reason is the environment Suggestion
Another
were
they grew up. The environment play In or at or to what place
where
most important part
in Suggestion
a most important part
the most important part
students
mental development so students choose their courses depending on their hope to have respect in their community which gives specific careers high level of respect and Suggestion
students'
student
student's
igonres
what else.
One the other hand, a refuse to acknowledge
ignores
lot
of people think in practical way
before choosing their courses in university and focus on subjects that will Suggestion
a practical way
the practical way
led
them to a good Suggestion
lead
job
when they graduate specially science and technology subjects.
They justify their desire by giving some good reasons. Such
as, they believe that the main purpose of studying is to get good
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a good job
job
and earn a lot
of money so they choose the courses which make sure they will get that.
Another reason is currently developments
, science and technology subjects break new ground in global development and offering a Suggestion
developable
developmentally
developmental
lot
of work opportunities around the world because of that everyone must invest his skills in thess
denotes a person or thing
this
these
sections
and don’t study any subject else.
In conclusion, each group of people has justified their views with good reasons. Group one Suggestion
section
believe
that following your ambition and trying to earn respect in your community is what you need to be Suggestion
believes
more creativity
, where group two believe that work opportunities, good Suggestion
more creative
job
with a lot
of money is what you have to focus on. In my oppinion
you should follow your a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
ambition but
don’t let him Accept comma addition
ambition, but
led
you to closed end without Suggestion
lead
job
, you have to study what subjects that you love and provide a good Suggestion
a job
job
when you graduate at both.Submitted by mohamadaeash on
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