You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear John,I'
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writing to let you know that my departure date for Canada is drawing near and I'
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busy with preparations.As you know, I'
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coming to your country for doing a Master in Business Administration.I'
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going to live in Toronto
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the two years of my studies. I know that the rent along with other expenses like food is simply unavoidable. So I would need a part-time job to pay for it.I would really appreciate it if you could help
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job for me. Could you like asking around among your friends, colleagues or look about it up in the newspapers?In fact, I'
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ready to work as an attendant at the gas station or as a waiter at the restaurants. Unfortunately, I haven't any experience, but I'
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a very hard-working and sociable person. So if you come across any job offer which can apply to me, I would like to know about them.Thank you for your attention to my request.I hope your reply will not take long.Take care...
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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