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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

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In the
last
 twenty years learning English
has become
Suggestion
have become
 a necessity for lots of occupations. Those who want to learn English go to some courses in order to improve their skills with native teachers.
However
, from my point of view, native tutors are not the best way to learn English. Because of studying with a
teacher
 who is the same country as you provide some opportunities
such
 as better communication and knows some methods as teach you. On the one hand, communicating while learning English with a tutor speaking a foreign language can be
tough especially
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tough, especially
 when you have a question to ask in relation to English topics.
Moreover
, the
teacher
 must have misunderstood.
Therefore
, the question can be explained wrongly by the foreign
teacher
.
For
Suggestion
To
 illustrate, when I went to an English course I studied
with
Suggestion
in
 an English-speaking
teacher
 and I had not taught a subject called a relative clause. I have asked him and
then
 he has
explained but
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explained, but
 I had not found out.
On the other hand
, a
teacher
 speaking the same language as you know some essential points which might be slogged on by the students. Because of the fact that
instructors
Suggestion
the instructors
 were a candidate to learn English in the past, he or she knows the best types to teach the native pupils. A great number of reports in
this
 field highlight that if you desire another tongue,
initially
 students should tend to teachers who are the same in terms of linguistic. In the light of
this
 information above, it can be clearly said that learning with a foreign instructor brings some disadvantages with regards to communication and other aspects. People who want to speak in English should not prepare at least in the
first
 stage of the learning process.
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