3. Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

The traditional festivals or holidays are celebrated in the vast majority of countries by

government

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governments

the government

with huge expenses. It is claimed by a group of people that money which is spent for festivals should be invested in more useful things. I disagree with the given statement since I believe that these celebrations are the way of protection of

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country’s cultural heritage

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the country’s cultural heritage

a country’s cultural heritage

and will lead to

stronger relationship

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stronger relationships

a stronger relationship

of

society

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the society

.

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of all, public celebrations remind people the national values of their old cultures. It helps

indigenuos

originating where it is found

indigenous

people to pass their cultural heritage to the

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generations. It is undeniable that

maintaning

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintaining

mentioning

mountain

of traditions of

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country

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the country

is vitally important to represent it in other foreign countries as each

countries

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country

have their own worthies and history.

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, national festivals or holidays make a stronger bond between

citiziens

a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

citizens

citizen

and promote a social solidarity in

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country

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the country

a country

. Needless to say, a stable relationship of people will enable

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country

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the country

countries

to be more powerful.

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, The Independence Day of Republic is the one of the most necessary celebrations. If all people enthusiastically celebrate it, high inspiration of association would be felt in the

country

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. In conclusion,

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quantitiy

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the quantity

quantity

of money is spent on public holidays is much

,

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,

it is

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as beneficial as other useful things. It enables old history and national values of

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country

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the country

to be preserved and allows local people to be much closer to each other.