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Today more and more tourists are visiting place where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays, an increasing number of
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 are willing to travel to the place where the natural environment is harsh.
However
,
this
 trend has brought both advantages and disadvantages to the
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
travelling
travels
. I would like to give some examples in my article.
First
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to talk about
benefits
Suggestion
the benefits
. People’s living standard has improved significantly and more and more people have a desire for exploring unfamiliar environments.
For example
, If people have the chance, personally, to see a mirage in
Sahara Desert
Suggestion
the Sahara Desert
 or auroras in
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
, The scene will be a very different experience for them than reading descriptions
from
Suggestion
of
 an article. By doing
this
, tourists can extend their
horizon
Suggestion
horizons
 and enrich their knowledge.
Moreover
, some people, especially those
successful
Suggestion
successes
 in businesses are willing to strengthen their confidence through exploring the places under bad conditions.
once
Suggestion
Once
 their steady confidence has been built, it may help them to tackle the unpredictable issues in their daily lives and will be helpful in developing their career
at
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in
future
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the future
.
On the other hand
. It is true that when people get what they want from the journey, the risk of getting hurt or losing their lives
arise
Suggestion
arises
, Especially for those who do not have enough supplies. What is more appalling is that some of the overconfident people would try to complete the journey even if the conditions at that moment are not suitable for completing it. In sum, the disadvantages are obvious because around 2000 lives were lost every year due to
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to
such
 high-risk places, but the benefits that
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 obtain from the process are
also
 tremendous. People should have abilities to ensure their own safety beforehand when jumping into
such
 places.

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