The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an afford to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the problems which a growing of population of overweight people

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system, some people believe that, the most effective

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a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)

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these issues is to have more game and

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in schools. In my opinion,

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is an essential way to

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another factor should be held in account is to have a good

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of all, including more game and

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in school's lesson will acknowledge children on how to keep them fit and

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health

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healthy

since children are more likely to learn everything new and fun. With

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teacher

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teachers

the teacher

can instill in students the habit of following a healthy lifestyle from the start. A clear example is about myself. I learned the

physical

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physics

lesson when

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was in Primary School. To now, I continue to go to gym club every weekend since

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is my habit.

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, inserting

exercise

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activity

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into

school curriculum

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the school curriculum

is really helpful in

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system.

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health

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the health care issue

health care issues

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issue with obesity is to have an

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. Having

exercise

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with a poor

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won't lead to healthy and fit. A good nutrition is an important part of leading to

heathy lifestyle

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healthy lifestyles

healthy lifestyle

a healthy lifestyle

heavy lifestyle

healthier lifestyle

. Combined with physical activity, your

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can help you to reach and maintain a

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health

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healthy

healthier

weight, reduce a risk of chronic diseases and promote your overall

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.

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, unhealthy eating habits have contributed to obesity

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in the US about 13% of U.S population. So

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health

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the health care system

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system will never be out of stress without informing people on how to eat healthy. In conclusion, I strongly agree that involving children with physical class is the important key to issue

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problem, but

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is really not enough

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for

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have to go through with.