Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports Do you agree or disagree

Almost any day of the week, you can look at the newspaper and read articles about how the government is wrong to allocate

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and should pay more attention to

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than to

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and

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There are several controversial points of view on

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issue and everyone believes in their own way and tries to defend their point of view. The first

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believes that it is necessary to allocate more

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for

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than for

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industries as

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and

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, because of some probability that the coming new generation will not be educated The alternative point of view is based on advantages, and in

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way other industries can be

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developed. The problems associated with

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issue and the allocation of

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in General

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have always been

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of the most pressing problems around the world. How should we feel about deciding whether to do

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and pay more attention to

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When discussing

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controversial issue, it is impossible to give

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very definite answer for sure. On the

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hand, it is obvious that in any

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, regardless of the laws,

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is considered

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of the main and important factors. It doesn't matter whether you like it or not you have to accept the fact that without

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the

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can't exist because over time there will be no people who

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continue to manage the

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competently. A good example of

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is Africa, a

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with a small budget for

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they have no young cadres who could develop the

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, it can

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be argued that not only

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contributes to the development of the

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, there are other industries

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as

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and

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. So they can develop the

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from the other side, like culture and tourism. Take

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such

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countries

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as Argentina Spain Italy Maldives. All these

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are United by a propensity for

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and

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, with

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they are very developed from the side of tourism, culture, and

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and are among the top very well-off and popular

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. In conclusion, taking into account all of the above in our final analysis, we can say that both of these thoughts have a right to exist and both are inherently right. But in fact, history confirms that knowledge has been valued for centuries, and in some

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it has sometimes helped to solve and overcome problems,

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the developed

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themselves are

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with a good learning structure. And I can say that all

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should allocate more

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to

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.