Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?

It goes without saying that
nature
provided the resources necessary for humans to emerge as the planet’s dominant species and we continue to depend on its bounty to thrive.
Althought
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Although
it is
a
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an
essensial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
part of human life, a
huflux
people
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person
are
introduces an alternative
or
lack of concern towards about healthy
evironment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. There are two main reasons causes, environment disconnections and the lure of
technolog
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
.
Possible solution
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A possible solution
The possible solution
is to join in outdoor activities and build natural’s
perpective
of or concerned with or related to the future
prospective
landscaping. One of the
reason
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reasons
people are ignoring the environment is that human connection to natural seems more tenuous than ever today.
This
is because many people tend to lead a busy life and after the long day at work it is better to relax at home
instead
of walking around the part.
For instance
, a study found that more than half of
alduts
a fully developed person from maturity onward
adults
reported spending five
our
a period of time equal to 1/24th of a day
hour
or less in
nature
each week and being satisfied with
this
small amount of time spend outdoors. To tackle
this
issue, the federal
widelife
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
and park agencies should promote a wide
varitiy
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
of outdoor activities tailored to the interests of a board cross-sections of society.
Therefore
, adults and children will be introduced to
nature
as a place not only for outdoor experiences, but as the places that should be conserved cared for. Another problem to consider is that the increasing use of computer, smart phones,
television pulling
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television, pulling
many people away from the natural world.
As a result
of development of technology, people are likely to expose to screen time.
For example
, parents of children 8 to 12 years old said that their children spend three times as many hours with computers and televisions each week as they do playing outside. To solve
this
problem, parents can teach the kid plant their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
vegetables and flowers in reusable containers right by their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
place to play
instead
of spending their time on computers. If
this
is implemented it would have positive on
nature
awareness and a reduction in using computer. In conclusion,
ingoring
refuse to acknowledge
ignoring
the
nature
is increasing because of natural disconnection and high-tech development. Both parents and children should participant the outdoor activities and learn how to build the
nature
screen. Unless
this
issue is taken on,
then
the problem of natural ignorance will lead to a misunderstanding of natural’s perspective in the future.

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