In many countries, weddings are getting bigger and more expensive than the past. Is this a positive or negative development?

Getting married is the most important and memorable day of everyone’s life. A
girnomouse
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
ginormous
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
extravagant wedding is
become
Suggestion
becoming
popular than ever in various countries.
This
essay agrees that big wedding is
negative development
Suggestion
a negative development
because of
financial impact
Suggestion
the financial impact
and On one hand, it is
equally
Suggestion
equal
to recognize that big wedding will impact couples
finance
Suggestion
financial
. To illustrate, the budget for
wedding
Suggestion
the wedding
included the bride’s wedding dress, of course, as well as caters, a venue, invitation, photography and more.
For instance
, in the US, weddings cost an average of more than $33,000, including all the expenses related to the engagement ring, ceremony and reception, according to the
lastest
up to the immediate present; most recent or most up-to-date
latest
study. Indeed, after the party bliss wears off and it’s back to normal life, being stuck with the bill may make the host have buyer’s remorse.
This
example indicates that the more they expense of celebrating the wedding, the more money will be wasting. On
another hand
Suggestion
the other hand
other hand
, it is important to recognize that the big wedding is harmful
for
Suggestion
to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
.
This
is because wedding decorating stuff
are usually made
Suggestion
is usually made
eco-unfriendly products like plastic bag paper, plastic plate, balloon,
artifical
contrived by art rather than nature
artificial
flowers, so one.
For example
, balloons are a lot of fun and they make great wedding decor,
inronically
contrary to plan or expectation
ironically
, they are far from green. Not only do they contribute to the landfill once “I do” are done, they are extremely harmful to birds, sea life, and other animals that swallow them.
This
example shows that behind the bliss wedding stories, people are generating a ton of garbage,
carbondioxie
, and a greenhouse gas that are terrible for
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. In conclusion, a
girnomouse
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
ginormous
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
extravagant wedding not only impact the couple’s
finance
Suggestion
finances
but harm the
invironment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. I believe that its disadvantages will eclipse its advantages
Submitted by tam.nb8454 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: