The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world's top ten exporters of fish in 2000.
The graph reveals the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
fishermen
between 1970 and 2000 in different continents and the table describes the top ten fish exporters in the world in the year 2000. Overall
, fishing communities had developed in size in most countries and regions, with the number of fishers in Asia
more numerous and Asia
countries leading the list of exporters.
According to
the data in the bar chart, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
fishermen
tended to accelerate in Asia
, Africa and North America
from 1970 to 2000. In Asia
, the number of
fisheries population abruptly surged Correct quantifier usage
apply
roughly
16 million, Change preposition
by roughly
whereas
there is a modest growth of fishermen
in Africa and North America
. After that
the figure stayed stable Add a comma
,that
in
Change preposition
for
fishing
population in Europe and South Correct article usage
the fishing
America
. Especially, in Europe
the Add a comma
,Europe
fishermen
reached the lowest point of the bottom at 0.4 million in 1980, while
this
figure still kept constant roughly
1.2 million from 1970 to 2000 in South Change preposition
at roughly
America
.
Turning to the table, there was a more detailed look at the chart in 2000 that indicated top
ten exporters of fish in the world. Thailand is the world's leading fish exporter, but European and North American countries Correct article usage
the top
also
rank in the next
ranks. Norway and Denmark are in second
and fifth place, while
the United States is in the third
largest export position and Canada is sixth. China and Taiwan took fourth and seventh place, while
Russia, Indonesia and South Korea took eighth, ninth and tenth place respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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