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The map supplied highlights data on an island which are nearly 300 metres across and 900 meters wide after and before its enhancement into a tourist resort. Overall, a plethora of facilities has been constructed for tourists, albeit a number of trees have been cut down throughout the surveyed time frame.
Furthermore
, the number of trees decrease;
conversely
 new ones planted. Looking at the details, restaurant and leisure centre have been erected near the beach;
however
, the pier and receptions to the north of the map have been added over the given time frame. The plants to the west of the map have been cut down and changed into houses. The number of trees decrease, while new ones have been planted near the pier and receptions at the same time as the new houses in the east of the island have been constructed. Adding more data, the park has been opened near the sea, whereas the children’s playground to the southeast of the island has been introduced. The beach has remained in the same place, whilst the ships have added.

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