The bar chart shows the relative electricity consumption and cost per year of various household devices. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining the data and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares 16 different items of household equipment in terms of the
overall
number of
consumption and expense of operating.
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Overall
, it is noticeable that pool pump
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pumps
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spas
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although
, the relative energy consumption of domestic equipment tends to have no clear pattern.
To begin
with, the spa has accounted for a total of around 190 dollars, approximately 2225 kWh
per year
which is the highest figure shown in the chart. In second
place on the all-time chart is the pool pump, just nearly 125 or 1500 kWh
/year
. However
, there are vast differences in cost
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the cost
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microwaves
fridge
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fridges
While
the former consumes only $15 or 150 kWh
/year
, the latter consumes at least six times that amount.
Only three household items – the home computer, aquarium/ terrarium, and dishwasher spending have witnessed more than 42 dollars, all with similar proportions of kWh
(over 650 kWh
) for each item. Apart from that, there are some household items which consume relatively little energy namely electric blanket (approx. $10 0r 100 kWh
/year
), microwave oven
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ovens
kWh
/year
) and television ($17 and around 170 kWh
/year
).Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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