Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Children

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the future generation of the nation should be guided

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a good path.As per my views

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there is an equal responsibility of both parents and teacher should be involved in the development of the

children

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child's

child

life. At

early stage

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an early stage

the early stage

of the children, before they step into the primary

schools

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school

parents ought to teach the basic things which would create confident among them as well as in their earlier stage children will learn the habit according to the actions done by the family members.

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therefore

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the parents are the role model for the children habits and thought process. Teachers are the backbone

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children

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child's

children's

education

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children

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Children

face a

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not subject or susceptible to change or variation in form or quality or nature

changeless

changes

once stepping into the primary education like new people

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environment.

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teacher

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the teacher

plays the vital role in showing the children a new world

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School is a place where the Children are treated regardless of the gender, religion and culture and they have opportunities to learn the friendship, cooperation and to explore the talents to the outer world.School is the place where the cooperation has been learned where there is a single

children

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child

in the family where cooperation was rarely found between children. According to my views

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Being a good member of the society is bounded with lots of people and situations.Sometimes good people

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face

the bad times in their life.As the elderly people

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say

Experience can be

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gotten

from the previous mistakes.

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depends on the situation happen and how we are reacting to the situation. Being good or bad, it’s

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up to

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person's

peoples'

peoples

perception of mind about the situation or things

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Both parents and teachers will teach theoretically their experience which is good

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for

the children as well as it’s difficult to satisfy the people even the people are good. By concluding

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being good to the society

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is up to the children taking

is up to the children take

is up to the children taken

takes up to the children

their life in a good or bad path.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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306 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

good members of society
teach
parents
schools
responsibility
values
respect
empathy
responsibility
formal education
citizenship
ethics
social responsibility
lead by example
role models
conducive environment
extracurricular activities
community involvement
collaborate
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Fully explain your ideas

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