Write a letter to you friend who want to stay at you home, but you will be away on a vacation for a month. Discuss details about the trip and how yo get keys of the apartment

Dear Ana, I hope you are doing fine. It's been a
while
since we have caught up. As we have discussed earlier, I will not be able to spend
time
with you
this
time
. I was thinking of meeting you upon your arrival but, unfortunately, I will not be able to do so. I will leave the city on 7th June just before the day of your arrival.
However
, I have already told one of my dearest friends, and neighbour 'Anita' to accompany you during your journey home. She will be there for you at the airport and will
also
hand over the keys to
to
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you. You can call her any
time
for any help. Her phone number is 88976699. I
also
like you to know that my homekeeper usually comes 5 times a week. So, you don't have to worry about watering the plants and other cleaning stuff, as she will help you with cooking and cleaning work. As you know, there are many beautiful places to visit in Sidney. You can visit a botanical garden, green park and history museum anytime which is within walking distance from my home. I
also
want to inform you about my arrival
time
. I will come to Sydney on the 9th of July.My flight will arrive at 9:00 am and will reach
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home around 11 am .As I already have spare keys, you don't have to be worried about my arrival. I hope you enjoy your visit. Please don't hesitate to contact me for any help. Lots of love. With best regards, Saba
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Task Achievement
To enhance task response, ensure every aspect of the prompt is addressed fully. This includes providing more details about the trip itself.
Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider using transitional phrases between paragraphs for smoother flow.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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  • host
  • regret
  • destination
  • intriguing
  • collect
  • security systems
  • house rules
  • recommendations
  • nearby attractions
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  • make yourself at home
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