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some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #history #waste #time
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Historically
 the
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 of past events, particularly in human affairs. Some people think that studying
history
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 is very important, while others think that it is not important to
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 about
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. In
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 essay I am going to discuss about both views.
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, to learn about
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history its
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history, it's
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 important because a student must know about
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history
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historical
 knowledge and about what happened in the ancient times, it can be about the kings or the rulers who ruled countries as well as the wars that happened and
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 about our the culture of the and customs and how are grandparents were living. Learning about the details will not only help to build good moral character, but
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 from a very young age to have a good personality trait.
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, learning by learning
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history, we
 are passing the historical experiences of the new generations, so they might learn a lesson or be proud of the past experiences.
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, most people think that it is not important to learn about
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 because they memorize dates, names and facts when they
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history
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 and
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 information's it’s a waste of time and
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, it's something from the past will not give us benefits or will not use it in present or future.
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, they believe that learning technology and science can bring more benefit in their lives. In conclusion, some people think that there is no need to
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 and learn about
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, while others its important and valuable to learn about
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 and without knowledge of
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, scientific discoveries cannot bring a wide range of advantages. In my opinion learning
history
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 is valuable and important in human's life.

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