In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Our Social, economic conditions has evolved with time and it
lead
to change in Suggestion
leads
way
we Suggestion
the way
ways
a way
shop
these days. Earlier shopping was done to Use synonyms
fulfill
the needs e.g. put in effect
fulfil
people
required new cloth due to season change. But now people do shopping not because of Suggestion
People
needs but
because it gives them fulfilment.
One of the positive Accept comma addition
needs, but
Use synonyms
outcome
of Suggestion
outcomes
this
phenomenon is that it helps to generate employment. Earlier people used to go to Linking Words
markets
for shopping but now these markets are replaced by malls. These malls are Suggestion
market
single avenue
where people from different section of society and Suggestion
a single avenue
differnt
walks of life gather to watch unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
movie
, have dinner and shopping. Given heavy footfall of people Suggestion
a movie
to
malls, these become primary places where people Suggestion
in
shop
these days. All the different clothingUse synonyms
,
Accept space
,
jewellary
or electronic brands are available at single place which gives employment to an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
lot
of people in stores, Suggestion
a lot
lots
eatries
a building where people go to eat
eateries
,
parking, security and maintenance related work within malls.
Accept space
,
Linking Words
Second positive
Suggestion
The second positive outcome
outcome
of shopping is that it helps circulation of Use synonyms
money
within Use synonyms
economic ecosystem
. It is believed that economy is healthy if Suggestion
an economic ecosystem
money
keeps exchanging hands. People Use synonyms
now shops
not only for Suggestion
are now shopping
needs but
Accept comma addition
needs, but
also
to get Linking Words
sense
of satisfaction. Suggestion
a sense
This
means Linking Words
Use synonyms
money which
was earlier blocked in Accept comma addition
money, which
accounts
of people have one more avenue to be back into Suggestion
the accounts
circle
, Suggestion
circulation
thus
shopping helps to promote economic spending which is Linking Words
positive
Suggestion
a positive outcome
outcome
.
Use synonyms
Linking Words
Third positive
Suggestion
The third positive outcome
outcome
of shopping is emotional well being of the people who indulge Use synonyms
into
it for Suggestion
in
sake
of pleasure. They consider it as Suggestion
the sake
stress relieving activity
which helps them to feel positive after doing shopping. In Suggestion
a stress relieving activity
this
contextLinking Words
,
it is good if someone spend Accept space
,
money
to Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
instead
of taking medicines to eliminate stress Linking Words
cause
by work or other reasons.
Suggestion
caused
Fourth positive
Suggestion
The fourth positive outcome
outcome
for shopping is that it promotes creative ideas due to Use synonyms
competion
. a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
compression
compaction
so
it is positive for people who as associated with companies where people spend to a very great extent or degree
So
money
on shopping. Given people spend Use synonyms
money
for shopping round the year it means companies needs to generate new ideas to attract Use synonyms
customors
so that they keep coming to try new products.
In the someone who pays for goods or services
customers
end to
conclude, we should not look at shopping from Accept comma addition
end, to
micropic view
of spending Suggestion
the micropic view
micro pic view
money
. It needs to be looked as economic activity which generates different avenue for people to earn livelihood, be creative and attain Use synonyms
emotional health
for people who Suggestion
the emotional health
shop
and Use synonyms
also
who are associated in different related industries.Linking Words
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