In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Our Social, economic conditions has evolved with time and it

lead

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leads

to change in

way

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the way

ways

a way

we

shop

these days. Earlier shopping was done to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

the needs e.g.

people

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People

required new cloth due to season change. But now people do shopping not because of

needs but

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needs, but

because it gives them fulfilment. One of the positive

outcome

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outcomes

of

this

phenomenon is that it helps to generate employment. Earlier people used to go to

markets

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market

for shopping but now these markets are replaced by malls. These malls are

single avenue

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a single avenue

where people from different section of society and

differnt

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

walks of life gather to watch

movie

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a movie

, have dinner and shopping. Given heavy footfall of people

to

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in

malls, these become primary places where people

shop

these days. All the different clothing

,

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,

jewellary

an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)

jewellery

or electronic brands are available at single place which gives employment to

lot

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a lot

lots

of people in stores,

eatries

a building where people go to eat

eateries

,

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,

parking, security and maintenance related work within malls.

Second positive

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The second positive outcome

outcome

of shopping is that it helps circulation of

money

within

economic ecosystem

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an economic ecosystem

. It is believed that economy is healthy if

money

keeps exchanging hands. People

now shops

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are now shopping

not only for

needs but

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needs, but

also

to get

sense

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a sense

of satisfaction.

This

means

money which

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money, which

was earlier blocked in

accounts

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the accounts

of people have one more avenue to be back into

circle

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circulation

,

thus

shopping helps to promote economic spending which is

positive

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a positive outcome

outcome

.

Third positive

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The third positive outcome

outcome

of shopping is emotional well being of the people who indulge

into

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in

it for

sake

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the sake

of pleasure. They consider it as

stress relieving activity

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a stress relieving activity

which helps them to feel positive after doing shopping. In

this

context

,

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,

it is good if someone spend

money

to

shop

instead

of taking medicines to eliminate stress

cause

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caused

by work or other reasons.

Fourth positive

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The fourth positive outcome

outcome

for shopping is that it promotes creative ideas due to

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a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competition

compression

compaction

.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

it is positive for people who as associated with companies where people spend

money

on shopping. Given people spend

money

for shopping round the year it means companies needs to generate new ideas to attract

customors

someone who pays for goods or services

customers

so that they keep coming to try new products. In the

end to

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end, to

conclude, we should not look at shopping from

micropic view

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the micropic view

micro pic view

of spending

money

. It needs to be looked as economic activity which generates different avenue for people to earn livelihood, be creative and attain

emotional health

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the emotional health

for people who

shop

and

also

who are associated in different related industries.