Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree
It is argued that following training programs regarding proper parenting should be made compulsory
to
all parents. Suggestion
for
However
, I personally disagree with this
notion completely because the most mothers and fathers already have an essential skills and knowledge regarding child
care
and simply they don’t have time
to attend those.
To begin
with, nowadays parents are already equipped with necessary information regarding parenting. In fact, there are colossal number
of Suggestion
a colossal number
ways
Accept comma addition
ways, such
such
as media, internet, magazines from which they can gather enough knowledge regarding the way they should interact with their offsprings and even they are able to clarify their practical problems. Hence
, there is no necessity to implement mandatory child
care
training. For an example, a survey done in the UK has revealed that the majority of young individuals aquire
vital information with respect to the parenting through online and media prior to the marriage and have children.
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
Furthermore
, people hardly find any time
to participate
Suggestion
participate in child care
child
care
training programs due to their busy life style
at present. a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
This
is because most of the time
both parents go for
work during Suggestion
to
day
the time after sunrise and before sunset while it is light outside
daytime
time
and they have multiple other activities such
as shopping,
cleaning, cooking to be completed during Accept space
,
rest
of their Suggestion
the rest
time
. Hence
, they are not in a position to find extra time
period for attending such
lessons. For an instance, the average day time
work shift in Sri Lanka is approximately 8-10 hours and most of the time
, in a family, both parents are employed.
In conclusion, child
care
training should not be mandatory to
all parents and rather it can be optional. Suggestion
for
This
is because frequently mothers and fathers can gain the necessary information regarding parenting through various other methods conveniently
and they do not have a Suggestion
convenient
time
to attend those in their busy life shedules
.plan for an activity or event
schedules
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