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Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?

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Many
health
 workers have
desire
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a desire
the desire
 to
work
 in urban areas, whereas in rural areas, the number of people working in
medical sector
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the medical sector
 lacks. The reason for
this
 is because
health
 workers are more well-paying in big cities than rural areas and many of them do not appreciate living away from their families.
This
 issue can be resolved by raising
wage
Suggestion
wages
 for doctors in
countrysides
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the countrysides
 and facilitate their contact with their relatives. Medical workers prefer to live in metropolis rather than countryside for several reasons.
Firstly
, big cities have most large-scale hospitals where doctors would earn a large amount of money if they have good qualifications. While, in suburb areas, due to the limitation in finance, doctors get less pay. Many of them choose to live in rural hospitals just because they have
emotional attachment
Suggestion
an emotional attachment
 with the local residents and the land they are working on. The
second
 reason is it some
health
 workers claim that they
can not
can not
cannot
 move away from their family members to
work
. Once they choose to live in rural areas, distance
setback prevent
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set back to prevent
set back prevent
 them from spending time with their relatives.
As a result
, they think that it is not worth living out of their
familly
a social unit living together
family
families
 because of their job. How could
this
 issue be addressed?
First
,
governements
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
 encourage
health
 workers to
work
 in rural areas by raising their income and proving them with more benefits. The
second
 solution is to facilitate opportunities for them to meet up with their family members and friends.
For instance
, medical staffs can make phone calls without being charged. It would be better to sponsor vehicles and free
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
 for
heallth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
healthy
 workers while they are on duty in rural areas. No one refuses to accept job with great perks like these. In conclusion, it is a tough decision for
health
 workers to
work
 in remote places as they do not have good income and force to live away for their families.
Nevertheless
, authorities could
enalbe
render capable or able for some task
enable
 workers to move from the big cities to small towns to employ by enhancing their standard of living and allowing them to gather with their relatives during their job.
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