Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view point ?
Art
is a best way to show our imagination in the painting .
It is believed by Accept space
.
few individulas
that the higher authority totally waste their Suggestion
a few individuals
few individuals
money
to spent
on the artsSuggestion
spend
,
while Accept space
,
this
money
can be better spent on others.This
eassy
will emphasize upon agreement and disagreement linked to the matter and provide an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
assay
opinion
regarding it.
To embark on, higher authority should Suggestion
an opinion
opinions
spent
Suggestion
spend
money
on improve
the quality of human life Suggestion
improving
such
as on infrastructure .
Infrastructure is a primary need of Accept space
.
people therfore
Suggestion
the people, therefore
people therefore
the people therefore
the people therfore
goverenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
fund
should be spent to improve infrastructure systemSuggestion
funding
.
Accept space
.
In addition
, some money
should be spent on efucation system
because many individuals have Suggestion
the education system
education system
illiterate that's
why schoolsAccept comma addition
illiterate, that's
,
colleges and other educational institute should be cost of Accept space
,
free
for that people who Suggestion
freedom
can not
afford can not
cannot
high fees
of educational institutes due to which they will be literate.Suggestion
the high fees
for
example, in India 50% of Suggestion
For
indian
have a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
illeterate
because they not able to read or write
illiterate
illiterates
electorate
can not
afford the fees of schoolscan not
cannot
.
On the flip sideAccept space
.
,
Accept space
,
art
helps to give the creativity of imagination and it
it is
it's
also
helpfull
to keep safe the history as a painting providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
withwhich
people Suggestion
with which
stay touch with
their culture Suggestion
stay in touch with
therfore
spent (used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
money
on art
by government is not a wasting .
Accept space
.
For instance
,
India Accept space
,
known
in the world for various Suggestion
is known
has known
culture
and tradition because India is a diverse Suggestion
cultures
country there
are many people live in India who belong to Accept comma addition
country, there
different culture
and tradition Suggestion
a different culture
therefore
indian
government spent some a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
money
on art
field .
To recapitulate, people Accept space
.
can not
deny the fact that can not
cannot
art
is crucial that's why higher authorities should be soent
caused or enabled to go or be conveyed or transmitted
sent
spent
sound
money
on arts
as well as on educationSuggestion
the arts
,
healthcare and others to the betterment of humans.Accept space
,
Submitted by balkarsingh60000 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.