Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view point ?

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Art

is a best way to show our imagination in the painting

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It is believed by

few individulas

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a few individuals

few individuals

that the higher authority totally waste their

money

spent

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spend

on the arts

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while

this

money

can be better spent on others.

This

eassy

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

issue

assay

will emphasize upon agreement and disagreement linked to the matter and provide

opinion

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an opinion

opinions

regarding it. To embark on, higher authority should

spent

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spend

money

improve

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improving

the quality of human life

such

as on infrastructure

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Infrastructure is a primary need of

people therfore

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the people, therefore

people therefore

the people therefore

the people therfore

goverenment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

governments

fund

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funding

should be spent to improve infrastructure system

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In addition

, some

money

should be spent on

efucation system

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the education system

education system

because many individuals have

illiterate that's

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illiterate, that's

why schools

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colleges and other educational institute should be cost of

free

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freedom

for that people who

can not

cannot

afford

high fees

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the high fees

of educational institutes due to which they will be literate.

for

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For

example, in India 50% of

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a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indian

have

illeterate

not able to read or write

illiterate

illiterates

electorate

because they

can not

cannot

afford the fees of schools

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On the flip side

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art

helps to give the creativity of imagination and

it is

it's

also

helpfull

providing assistance or serving a useful function

helpful

to keep safe the history as a painting

withwhich

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with which

people

stay touch with

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stay in touch with

their culture

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therefore

spent

money

art

by government is not a wasting

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For instance

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India

known

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is known

has known

in the world for various

culture

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cultures

and tradition because India is a diverse

country there

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country, there

are many people live in India who belong to

different culture

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a different culture

and tradition

therefore

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a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indian

government spent some

money

art

field

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To recapitulate, people

can not

cannot

deny the fact that

art

is crucial that's why higher authorities should be

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caused or enabled to go or be conveyed or transmitted

sent

spent

sound

money

arts

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the arts

as well as on education

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healthcare and others to the betterment of humans.

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