At the present time population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

In many nations around the world young people represent a large proportion of the

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relative to elderly people.

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offset

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offsets

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state of affairs, as a

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with a greater

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of young people is better able to grow its economy and care for its elderly citizens. One commonly cited disadvantage of a young

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is that it places a great strain on public services.

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of young people require more facilities to be built to accommodate them.

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example the government may need to invest more in the school system which requires additional public spending. Despite

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, there are

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of significant benefits to having a youthful

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more young people creates a bigger market for goods and services

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helps to boost the

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's economy because as young people get older they purchase essential consumer items

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as houses

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furniture and electrical goods.

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a large youthful demographic

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has social benefits as young people are able to provide care and support to their elderly parents and relatives.

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countries

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as Japan face challenges in looking after their ageing

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. In conclusion,

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there are drawbacks to having a youthful

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population it

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population, it

is clear that young people can make a significant contribution to their

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by developing the economy and providing support to older generation. On balance, I would argue that having a large

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of young people is beneficial to any

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