Some people think frequent short vacations are good while others argue that long term locations are helpful.discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both and give opinion.
Vacations are considered as a fascinating part in everyone's
life especially
for school children.Accept comma addition
life, especially
That is
why it is often argued that whether multiple short vacations or a single long vacation would be better for school children.Linking Words
due
to the difference of Suggestion
Due
time
both have their own Use synonyms
importance but
I open that long-term vacations can be really beneficial for the scholars.Accept comma addition
importance, but
This
essay will enunciate my views as well as the advantages of both the vacations in Linking Words
next
paragraphs.
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there
are Suggestion
There
number
of advantages of long vacations Suggestion
a number
such
as students can join coaching classes like football coachingLinking Words
,
swimming classes or any vocational Accept space
,
subjectscoaching
which can help the scholars to enhance their knowledge in that particular field.Suggestion
Meanwhile the
students are able to find part Accept comma addition
Meanwhile, the
time
jobs that would not only reduce the burden of finances on the Use synonyms
parents but
Accept comma addition
parents, but
also
help them to have a valid experience of that specific application.Linking Words
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Consequently they
can choose Accept comma addition
Consequently, they
this
field as a career and can get highly paid offers from popular companies.In Linking Words
this
way the scholars become more responsible and passionate towards their duties which is the indication of overall development. Apart from Linking Words
this
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,
students may Accept space
,
also
have a chance to meet their near and dear ones who are living abroad that might Linking Words
aid
to make the relationships more stronger as well as one has make an addition (to); join or combine or unite with others; increase the quality, quantity, size or scope of
add
chance
to visit different locations.
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a chance
the chance
time
vacationsUse synonyms
,
that are Accept space
,
also
quite beneficial for students as these frequent Linking Words
breaks help them
to get a relax and refresh during Suggestion
breaks to help them
study
.Suggestion
the study
these
Suggestion
These
day
Suggestion
days
of
can make them mentally strong which prevent The scholars from being exhausted.Frequent breaks help the students to spend quality from a particular thing or place or position
off
time
with family members and help The scholars to become socially extrovert.
To encapsulate frequent and long-term breaks during academic sessions Use synonyms
provide
various benefits to the students. Suggestion
provides
However
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advantages
of long-term brakes are eye-catching and benefit the scholar during Suggestion
the advantages
long run
in their life and progressing their overall development.Suggestion
long runs
a long run
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