Write a letter to your local council to tell him that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter include a. Tell him your name and where you are living b. Describe the problem c. Tell him what you want him to do for you

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Dear sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about the damage that caused for the road in front of my home and request you to resolve the same. My name is Sarulatha. I am residing in Abbco tower, King
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street AlNadha, Sharjah. It is a busy area where we have restaurants, supermarkets, parks, gyms and so on. It comes under your control and more residential area where children prefer to play outside. The major issue is that the
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-hole made by the electrical department to change the cable in front of my home was not replaced properly. Because of that vehicles passing on the road damaging the replaced surface and making it even bigger.
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is a residential area and we have more children playing outside and
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might cause them to fall into the hole which is creating a panic situation for the parents. It would be great if you could take appropriate action to replace the damages and rebuild the road for the safety of all the people
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for the younger ones. I hope you will understand the situation and take swift process on
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matter without any delay. I look forward to receiving a positive response on
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matter. Yours faithfully, Sarulatha Gnanasubramanian
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • potholes
  • cracks
  • uneven surfaces
  • inspection
  • repair
  • temporary solutions
  • follow-up
  • council
  • community safety
  • road maintenance
  • hazardous
  • inconvenience
  • urgent attention
  • immediate repair
  • contact details
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