Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, governments spend their incomes in different areas. Public services, which form some of these expenditures,

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have

a large amount of

investment

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. Beside that, governments

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have

another

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area like arts. In spite of importance of Public services, I

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don't agree

do not agree

with the opinion that the

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in

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the arts

is a waste of

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.

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with public services, there many different facilities

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as hospitals, schools, and roads that have really acceptable reasons to spend

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on them.

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and foremost, the stuffs that form the public services demonstrate the community’s life quality. If the

government

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,

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, doesn’t spend enough

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on hospitals, the health situation of society will decline, and the hospitals won’t cover the needs of the community.

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, if the schools, where the kids, who are the future of our world, get educated

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, haven’t sufficient

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, our children may not be well educated. So that, it will be the poor in our society that will be affected more and more, if the

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doesn’t invest enough

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on public services.

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, these critical reasons about

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public services doesn’t mean that the arts should be ignored.

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, it should be said that the arts institutions can’t generate much profit. So some theatres and other arts institutions can be closed, unless they get help from

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government

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the government

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, the arts have important impacts on our quality of life, and they are the demonstrations of our culture and history. Many people, who are residents or not, get great pleasure in going to see music or theatre performances, so the

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should provide some needs of the arts. To sum up, it is too clear that the quite amount of investments

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should be spent

on public services, but the art

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one of component

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of

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the quality

of our life.

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the expenditure on the arts isn’t a waste of

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,

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contrary

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contrary, this

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investment

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should be done more.